Monday, January 25, 2010

Where is the "Why"

I may have just found the worst print ad in history. It is a full page process color ad for a restaurant. The name/logo of the establishment takes up approximately 25% of the space. The phone number and address plus a huge Free Delivery take up about another 15%. The balance of the ad is their entire menu set in about 6 point type against a dark beige background. My middle age eyes can not decipher this copy even with the aid of my bifocals. While the ad lists and describes every item on the menu, one thing is notably missing from this ad--the "WHY". The ad doesn't tell a potential customer why they should give this restaurant a try. No where does it tell them that the "food is delicious" or that the "prices are unbeatable". There is nothing that distinguishes this restaurant from its' competitors. A strong benefit oriented headline would make this ad much stronger. As it stands the ad is a very expensive way to deliver a menu to their existing customer base.

Keep Smiling Keep Selling!

Thanks Jim Busch

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